New Images - your thoughts?!

[John E. Schultz]

Would appreciate any comments you have on these two new photos. Shot last night in my home-studio.

[Edson Carlos]

Good overall lighting in 001, the face looks a touch darker than the rest. She seems like a very versatile model and I'd love to see more. I could see her doing some really cool cheesecake stuff as a nice addition to her port.

009 has solid lighting too, lets see a shot of your entire work area at home! Model is confused in styles on this one, that pose would have been much stronger in a rosie the riveter, im a badass fist in the air kinda pose. She ended up with the elvis raised lip of a badass and an innocent "oops what happened" hand gesture. Doesnt blend.

[Beulah Jade Merwin]

B. E .A. utiful yet the 001 says "coppertone" and 009 says "burger fries and chocolate malted"

[Bodacious Betty {★}]

Overall, I think the photos are great but would have more of a vintage look if her hair and makeup were done in the style of that era, if that's the effect that you were going for.

[Honey B Hooligan {Madam}]

I agree with DC on both. 009 has an awkward facial expression/pose, both have decent lighting. Her eyes need more expression...the "vacant supermodel stare" is pretty boring. Not that you can do anything about that! all in all, great photos!

[Tiger Tiger]

I completely agree with Bodacious Betty.

The first one is well taken but isn't pin-up. I love the cheekiness of the second one and it has a great 80s vibe, but as Betty said if you changed the hair it would make a difference.