My first burlesque attempt - tips please!

[Darling Nightmare]

I've uploaded a video i just did of me attempting burlesque, its a bit rough as wasnt planned and i couldnt find a matching suspender belt so no stockings! But never the the less i was wondering what you lovely people think of it, smarted up could it be good enough for a show? What bits do you like, what dont you like and what bits can I make better (and how!).

 

Any advice would be greatly appreciated!!

 

http://www.pinuplifestyle.com/video/my-first-attempt-at-burlsesque

 

 

xXx

[John at My Favorite Pinups{★}]

not too shabby at all :)

I love the reveal.. it was cute and the look on your face made it
I would have liked to hear the music as you did for timing issues, part of it is making the music work for you

I think your motions are a bit stuttery, with practice and confidence those will become more fluid, but the space you were in might have also been a factor
It was small enough where I was kind of waiting for you to turn into a wall

I see the playful tease(ie: around 1:46 when you toss the dress) and that part works well.. and truthfully I didn't take notice of the "wobly belly" you mention

IMHO.. it's a good start... practice and confidence is key and that'll come in time

John

[Darling Nightmare]

Thanks yeh music u heard bout 29 seconds different lol thanks for advice tho I'll be working on it =]

John said:

not too shabby at all :) I love the reveal.. it was cute and the look on your face made it
I would have liked to hear the music as you did for timing issues, part of it is making the music work for you

I think your motions are a bit stuttery, with practice and confidence those will become more fluid, but the space you were in might have also been a factor
It was small enough where I was kind of waiting for you to turn into a wall

I see the playful tease(ie: around 1:46 when you toss the dress) and that part works well.. and truthfully I didn't take notice of the "wobly belly" you mention

IMHO.. it's a good start... practice and confidence is key and that'll come in time

John

[John at My Favorite Pinups{★}]

29 seconds? that makes a lot of sense.. I'll have to go back and watch with that in mind :)

Darling Nightmare said:

Thanks yeh music u heard bout 29 seconds different lol thanks for advice tho I'll be working on it =]

[Darling Nightmare]

I put 30 seconds I thought lol it's not exact! My iPod is crazy lol x

John said:

29 seconds? that makes a lot of sense.. I'll have to go back and watch with that in mind :) Darling Nightmare said:

Thanks yeh music u heard bout 29 seconds different lol thanks for advice tho I'll be working on it =]

[Darling Nightmare]

I have a slot in a newbie show in October =] better get practicing! X

[John at My Favorite Pinups{★}]

awesome! congrats

if you want to post more vids I'd be more than happy to watch more
LOL

Darling Nightmare said:

I have a slot in a newbie show in October =] better get practicing! X

[John at My Favorite Pinups{★}]

yea that didn't sound creepy at all did it

John said:

awesome! congrats

if you want to post more vids I'd be more than happy to watch more
LOL

[Edson Carlos]

You have good planning on the moves, execution could def be better. I think you feel like you're really grooving except you're not you're actually holding back. Really REALLY exaggerate those hip movements, when you feel silly moving so much, you're prob doing it right and it will look hot. Currently you're movements are small and a little robotic. Feeeeeeeel the music, feel it, if that takes ONE shot of something alcoholic, go for it =)

[Darling Nightmare]

im liking that advice for sure ;) haha thanks that one was bit of on the spot not thinking so much so next ones gonna be amazing i promise lol x

Edson {PL Team} said:

Feeeeeeeel the music, feel it, if that takes ONE shot of something alcoholic, go for it =)